Article Writing Homework Help

 The research paper development consisted of: (a) research paper topic (defining the topic of your research), (b) annotated bibliography (finding literature about the topic), (c) draft research paper (producing a draft paper based on the research topic/lit. review) and (d) final research paper (improving on the draft and writing a final paper). This week you will submit the final version of your paper, please use the template provided.

     This is a point my draft had made confusing “You will need to add to your lit. review and discussion section. Your problem statement is confusing, you talk about data management, but switch to big data, which is it? ” so lost some marks.

now i need a  final paper of the draft – attached the draft i need the final paper accordingly please