The paper needs to be entirely rewritten to discuss specifically the way that your major uses writing and research, two ongoing problems, and a close analysis of one specific scholarly journal, one trade magazine, one database, and one professional organization in your industry.
Before submitting in submission portal, please review the following: Make sure you:
Write a thorough introduction which specifically details the roles of Writing and Researchunique to your field (not just in general)
Have included and discussed TWO contemporary topics ongoing in your discipline and discussed their importance, relevance, etc to your field.
Have chosen FOUR total sources (one each of: scholarly journal, trade magazine/publication, a Research Institution or Professional Organization, and a scholarly electronic database. Then, make sure you have discussed EACH of your FOUR sources thoroughly according to the details of the prompt.
Cite all outside sources in MLA or APA format.
I have attached a sample essay. Use it only as a guide.
Note: Revision means revision. This is different from editing or “fixing.” Significant changes must be evident to me and documented by YOU in order for any grade change to occur. If you revise a paper, you MUST utilize Microsoft Word’s Track Changes function on the original document, so that I can see what has been revised. Any revision documents submitted without Track Changes on, will not be accepted.