History Homework Help

Hello.

I am in desperate need of having assistance with writing my thesis statement. I am in

the class Western Civilization and I am writing my thesis statement on a comparison/contrast of Roman and Greek education against the Biblical standards for teaching and training. It should answer the following questions: What did they do well? What did they leave out, or how did the fall short of the Biblical standard?

I have tried submitting 2 thesis statements but for some reason my teacher is looking for something more specifc. Can someone please help me or point me in the right direction with some information?

Thank you so much in advance. I appreciate any type of help!!